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i can close my eyes and visualize this...wonderful
posted by
Annicita
on March 25, 2011 at 8:39 PM
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Your words take me to my days of dragon flies and fishing holes and I suppose that is the greatest wish for every poet...to draw a picture with words like this picture drew for me.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 25, 2011 at 11:09 AM
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SOUNDS LIKE A GREAT WAY TO SPEND A DAY, THERE IS BEAUTY ALL AROUND IF WE WILL JUST LOOK AND SEE.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 25, 2011 at 10:01 AM
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Interesting original choises of word--luffing celophane/ cannons shooting colors...etc
posted by
jfm32
on March 25, 2011 at 8:58 AM
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Lucky dragonflies, fish to busy indulging. some grasses are really sweet, I used to know the ones to chew. Dream on Cuplets.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 25, 2011 at 8:49 AM
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A charming poem for one who has been won over by dragonflies.
posted by
mariss9
on March 25, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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