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I am liking the Biblical allusions here.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 25, 2011 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

QUITE A WRITER YOU ARE

posted by Riversidepoet on March 25, 2011 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Again, I wish to hell I could have fantasies like yours! When I spray,
I guess you did not see Eve Bob. Don't spray in the wind. 

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Again, I wish to hell I could have fantasies like yours! When I spray,
oops! all I do  is spray and I pump from time to time and try to dodge the blowback.  Eden would be nice.
A fine poem! - Bob

posted by 2902 on March 25, 2011 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Again, I wish to hell I could have fantasies like yours! When I spray,

posted by 2902 on March 25, 2011 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Fred has a time machine...well done
Fred is very useful Ariala he fits in where Edward would not.

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

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thank you Taps one tries not to be indelicate

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

Fred has a time machine...well done

posted by Ariala on March 25, 2011 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Very witty!  Well done!

posted by TAPS. on March 25, 2011 at 3:30 AM | link to this | reply

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Hi Sam would you like to audition, sorry but I think you are the only lady who wouldn't mind the joke. I hope 

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 12:44 AM | link to this | reply

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Yes Fred is rather handy at times Shobana.

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 12:41 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Jay,

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2011 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

I liked this poem and your side of the garden of eden.

posted by UtahJay on March 24, 2011 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

Garden of Eden and Fred was there too.. Very amusing CC - full of wit and humor.

posted by shobana on March 24, 2011 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

Great twist on your own garden of Eden! Well done and highly entertaining! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 24, 2011 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply