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This is truly awesome. It blessed me so. Do you mind if I copy it, giving you full credit of course but I want to send it to my daughter I think it will bless her socks off. Be blessed my friend.
posted by
Justi
on March 25, 2011 at 9:44 AM
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Definitely a keeper.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 25, 2011 at 3:33 AM
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Thank you Shobana, I'll give your cloud back
posted by
C_C_T
on March 25, 2011 at 12:38 AM
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Thank you Sam we all need a little sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 25, 2011 at 12:35 AM
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Very consuming thoughts CC - excellent poem, loved it.
posted by
shobana
on March 24, 2011 at 8:01 PM
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I really like tis poem; and these lines were outstanding:
It costs so little to contribute, just a few thoughts
to comfort one’s self. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2011 at 3:32 PM
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No I didn't not this one sometimes as you say I think that this is a lot of rubbish and try to do better. It is better to have a small collection that one feels moderately happy with than loads strewn all over I think. We must be very critical of ourselves Jay, I believe once we feel something is nearly perfect then we we never aspire to do better. Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 2:15 PM
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Re: excellent conclusion!
Thank you Ariala.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 2:09 PM
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This is good and surly a keeper, but I have to ask...did you rework it at all? I almost feel like I must rework those I repost, it makes them feel fresh to me. Very few go through unchanged. Yet I feel that poetry is like music to be replayed again and again finding new meaning each time.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 24, 2011 at 12:11 PM
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excellent conclusion!
posted by
Ariala
on March 24, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Re: C.C.
Thank you Troosha I don't trust those disks and always do a print-out
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 1:27 AM
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Thank you Lauren I must try and be more orderly
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 1:26 AM
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Well I like to improve on things Lion but sometimes one just can't get ones mind around it anymore thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 1:24 AM
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Sorry John I had already decided to visit you it is negotiable. I think I could be very creepy. What can you offer soul wise preferably. On second thought dollars might serve a more realistic purpose. I could still offer you a strong potato spell.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 1:23 AM
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The wheel turned at the right place a miracle indeed Cuplets
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2011 at 1:17 AM
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A perceptive poem,and clear. I will meditate on it. After 4.6 billion years ,hey presto! here we are! At least it`s a
miracle. As for meaning, well.....
posted by
CUPLETS
on March 23, 2011 at 6:49 PM
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Glad you reached an indefinite idea of finality. It actually made me stop drinking while i was reading it. I don't think there is anyyhing original about death. I think it is just a big nuisance. But when you kick the bucket, I don't want you to revisit me, because I don't like ghosts. However, if I go first, I might not do the same. Thus, I suggest
we do everything now and get it into our contract.
posted by
jfm32
on March 23, 2011 at 6:16 PM
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I see why you want to keep it. Reposts are a great way of sharing moments of exceptional genius with those that missed them first time...
posted by
lionreign
on March 23, 2011 at 1:59 PM
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i love your finishing line and dont apologise for a re post, us old bloggers have so much material i often re-post just to remind myelf i wrote it....
posted by
spiderfly
on March 23, 2011 at 1:02 PM
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C.C.
It's a keeper indeed!
posted by
Troosha
on March 23, 2011 at 12:36 PM
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