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Ok Lion I'll let you into a secret I am revising some poems as think it is better to have fewer hopfully if they are better.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 12:13 PM
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This is a VERY clever poem, I am very taken with it and have to go read it again now...
posted by
lionreign
on March 21, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Hi Cuplet good idea to make a comment or two it will bring in more readers thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:36 AM
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Lo Sam nice to see you around glad that you are happy today thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:33 AM
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Very interesting reply Shobana I usually wear a hat in spring it does help thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:30 AM
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Sure thing Chuck it has been around a lot longer than we have..
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:28 AM
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I guess you are right FS. We just tag along.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:26 AM
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Re: the look in a woman's eyes is far more meaningful....
Well you mention it Rumor so I have to concur thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:25 AM
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Re: And in the spring all young things.....and old ....their thoughts turn to
Or sleep in my case Kabu and turnips.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:23 AM
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Re: She gives as good as she gets, no?
Always I suspect Raye Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:21 AM
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thank you Jay it all ends as domestic.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:18 AM
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Re: This is very very well written...it is rich both in imagery and hidden
yes not so easy to give intelligent replies Ariala so I shall agree with the last part of your comment.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2011 at 1:17 AM
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Sensualy subtle, I would not scuttle a line of it.
posted by
CUPLETS
on March 20, 2011 at 10:11 PM
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What an awesome poem; I was fully engaged for I liked the metaphors that resounded in exquisite imagery! There's a lot in this poem too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 20, 2011 at 7:28 PM
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It is true CC, nature suggests and transforms love too. Excellent poetry my friend.
posted by
shobana
on March 20, 2011 at 7:13 PM
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Very nice, nature loves the change. It has a mind of its own
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 20, 2011 at 5:33 PM
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Nature holds many clues that make it tricky to figure out.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 20, 2011 at 12:21 PM
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the look in a woman's eyes is far more meaningful....
than Nature's foibles...I agree, C.C., Nature is very fickle, friend one day and foe the next...oh course, so can the look in a woman's eyes be likewise....yes, you are very subtle with this one, C.C., well said, and keeping us on our toes.
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Rumor
on March 20, 2011 at 10:37 AM
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And in the spring all young things.....and old ....their thoughts turn to
love.
posted by
Kabu
on March 20, 2011 at 10:27 AM
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She gives as good as she gets, no?
Deeply meaningful and well done, CC!
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Great imagery and metaphors, this poem has a primal feel to it, yet domestic at its roots...well done.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 20, 2011 at 5:33 AM
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This is very very well written...it is rich both in imagery and hidden
meanings. A masterpiece of subtle somethings...and mutual pleasings are gifts for those in love
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Ariala
on March 20, 2011 at 4:39 AM
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