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You are so good at expressing the hidden inner thoughts of a man
in response to being with a woman.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 15, 2011 at 11:08 AM
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I suppose sometimes one does not want to end that which should not be in the first place you tell me Sam,
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:34 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Well thank you Wiley I'll have another go at the old trench warfare.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:33 AM
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Thank you Jay a lucky streak perchance
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:31 AM
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Re: this is why they are called sweet dreams...
Yes Ariala if only we could reform them to our own satisfaction.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:30 AM
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I guess so Shobana, I know that you had ripples in one of yours but honestly this was written earlier.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:28 AM
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Thank you Simone it works sometimes
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:25 AM
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Re: this is delightful and realistic sad and fatalistic....so much emotion
Thank you Kabu we can but try
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:23 AM
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Re: C.C....
Thank you Rumor you know it better than I do.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2011 at 1:21 AM
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This, in my humble opinion, is one of your best. Wonderfully expressed! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 13, 2011 at 8:14 PM
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Gorgeous poem CC..rippling through each mind too.
posted by
shobana
on March 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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this is why they are called sweet dreams...
posted by
Ariala
on March 13, 2011 at 2:47 PM
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This is typical of you CC, another fine poetic showing.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 13, 2011 at 2:44 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
I'm just content to see you back here rippling the poetic blogs out old friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 13, 2011 at 2:02 PM
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The ripples set up great imagery for the concluding stanza! I could visualize them fading in the reference stanza but had trouble seeing them fade away in the last stanza! I suspect that it is difficult to see things end that may or may not be sad! This was a well conceived poem for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 13, 2011 at 12:53 PM
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It does seem to work that way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 13, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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this is delightful and realistic sad and fatalistic....so much emotion
and portrayed so well. thank you friend.
posted by
Kabu
on March 13, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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C.C....
Interesting comparison between the ripples caused by a pebble thrown into a pool of water and how she ripples softly through your thoughts and her sweet words float so closely to you, but still, they dissipate...yes, if only you could bend the rule...alas, we're left with wistful thinking...
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posted by
Rumor
on March 13, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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