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very nicely said, Kent....
the world of dreams can be a balm at times..
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posted by
Rumor
on March 12, 2011 at 1:52 PM
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Sometimes rhyme seems to (re) capture a transient moment made real again thru time and syntax, the language being the medium of focus thru which a thought is made concise as if its own reality. I don't know what I just said, but the rhyme really works for me.
posted by
jfm32
on March 11, 2011 at 4:02 PM
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Well done, River. Consistently good rhythm as well.
posted by
Troosha
on March 11, 2011 at 2:22 PM
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A very touching poem with a genteelness about it and a wonderful ending.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 11, 2011 at 1:04 PM
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