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xo my words always fall somewhere in between story and poem I try to read them out loud when I edit to feel the way they sound! thanks for your advice!! I think it reads better set shorter! :) xo
posted by
linxixo
on March 20, 2011 at 3:42 AM
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Good use of imagry, but I couldn't decide if it was a poem or a short story and think that I would enjoy reading it more if the lines were shorter. I liked the intense feelings because I can relate to them in my life as well.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 11, 2011 at 1:26 PM
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