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Re: Shobana, it always makes me think of that Star Wars episode
in which they land in the mouth of a humongous creature and just get ot in time. - Bob

posted by 2902 on March 9, 2011 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Mariss, that's why we crank the windows up! - Bob

posted by 2902 on March 9, 2011 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

I never get over feeling wary the thing may attack me!  when it is making it's noises.

posted by mariss9 on March 9, 2011 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

I think you have captured the whole procedure so well here Bob.

posted by shobana on March 9, 2011 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Thank you. There were only a few images I could think of for a
carwash, but they were pretty vivid.= Bob

posted by 2902 on March 9, 2011 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI. must come read this.
Thanks!  I think I  agree - what's FSI?

posted by 2902 on March 9, 2011 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Bob, in just a few lines you help us see and hear the all familiar
automated carwash.....

posted by Rumor on March 9, 2011 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful, you capture all the imagery you need in this.

posted by lionreign on March 9, 2011 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

FSI. must come read this.

posted by Kabu on March 9, 2011 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply