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Re:
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The danse of change
wings across bleeding dawn sight
and ethereal twilight bonding
a flight through memories corresponding
with heart's nature to remain?
posted by
Raye09
on February 26, 2011 at 2:19 PM
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Beautiful, just beautiful.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 26, 2011 at 1:13 PM
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bleu jay
white snow
how swiftly they arrive
how
of a sudden
they
are gone
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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The old is fine with me since I always seem to miss out on a lot of everyone's goodies that they have posted through the years.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 26, 2011 at 10:33 AM
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Gestating.....
posted by
Straightforward
on February 26, 2011 at 10:23 AM
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Ummmmm...
posted by
Straightforward
on February 26, 2011 at 10:23 AM
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Re: new or aged I love 'em all and will reread again and again ...like any
Thank you, Dear Lady..
posted by
Raye09
on February 26, 2011 at 8:26 AM
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Re:
Thank you, FSI
posted by
Raye09
on February 26, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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Re: Clever, I like it ! - Ash
Thanks Ash!
posted by
Raye09
on February 26, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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Not bad...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 26, 2011 at 8:19 AM
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w Very creative love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 26, 2011 at 3:24 AM
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It stands repeating Raye keep cooking
posted by
C_C_T
on February 26, 2011 at 12:25 AM
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That was an awesome first line! This is the third poem I have read tonight where the first line sets up the imagery so exquisitely! I have had fun reading them all, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 25, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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Very nice
Welcome back. You are one of the bright minds at blogit.com. Have a wonderful weekend. - Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 25, 2011 at 6:52 PM
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new or aged I love 'em all and will reread again and again ...like any
favourite book.
posted by
Kabu
on February 25, 2011 at 6:04 PM
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The storm makes for an interesting metaphor.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 25, 2011 at 4:40 PM
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Clever, I like it ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 25, 2011 at 3:47 PM
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