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I can feel the wind..
.. and I see the trees, the path.. and the sun as it changes colors..
.. Beautiful poem..
posted by
orcalion
on March 28, 2011 at 9:09 PM
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w A poem that talks to the trees. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 26, 2011 at 2:51 AM
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Lovely vivid description
posted by
lionreign
on February 25, 2011 at 6:28 AM
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Beautiful imagery - excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on February 24, 2011 at 6:20 PM
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this is like taking that walk myself.
But then, I would...
You make me want to find a poem inside, and bring it out.
posted by
Ciel
on February 24, 2011 at 11:48 AM
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thanks Utah-Jay for the comment
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 11:25 AM
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Re: eb, no wonder you've been mssing from here for a while :)! - Ash
it's been a while, can't find the time and when i have the time i'm just exhausted, not able to write when my mind is preoccupied with so many other things, I need to go see the hypnotist to clear my mind, i wonder what would flow out
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 11:23 AM
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thanks BC-A for reading. My planting of myself, I have traveled those paths that few less have taken, but have learned along the way
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 11:20 AM
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its too late for that the climb has already begun
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 11:15 AM
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Re: Sam444
thanks for the comment, i had partially wrote it quite some time ago, knew where i wanted to go with it but how to say it was the challenge. It could of turned out to have been a much longer Journey but cut it short.
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 10:58 AM
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Re: Riversidepoet
glad you liked it
posted by
eburns111
on February 24, 2011 at 10:38 AM
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WHAT A BEAUTIUFL JOURNEY YOU HAVE TAKEN ME ON
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 24, 2011 at 9:31 AM
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I was on that climb with you all the way and then the close was magnificent! As long as it's light I think there's promise! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 24, 2011 at 5:49 AM
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Well it was a hard climb Eburns but interesting, I think I will read it again rather than take it on.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 24, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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w Yourself’s a good planting. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 23, 2011 at 8:13 PM
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eb, no wonder you've been mssing from here for a while :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on February 23, 2011 at 6:06 PM
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Even at the end the sun shines, nice thought, and a nice poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM
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