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I do like this one and your other castle ones aswell Lionreign. I do enjoy your poetry.
If you have any old poems you can give me a link for to do with cheerful or happy things you'd like to enter the poetry challenge for on the 10th let me have the link or links in my comments before the 10th. Thanks again for entering the challenge last month I know everyone enjoys your poetry Lionreign it's very enjoyable :)
Here is a reminder of last month's challenge.
The cheerful, happy and laughter filled poetry challenge
This is the last poetry challenge it was just last month and this month it wont be on going month after month.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on March 8, 2011 at 5:51 AM
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Re: sam444
thank you so much, I rather thought this was one of my better ones so I am especially delighted that you liked it.
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Re: shobana
Oh yes. Of course for me it's a surprise if they look like more than a big pile of sand....
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 7:48 AM
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Re: we should all bild castles in the sand...some might stand forever.
Absolutely... and if not we can build more
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Re: Lovely, Lionreign. Very enjoyable,
thanks Cheerygirl
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 7:41 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Often, but then there is not so much sand on a rock....
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 7:38 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Oh yes... I can't seem to help myself
posted by
lionreign
on February 24, 2011 at 7:31 AM
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I love sand castles and this imagery had me on the edge for I did not know if it would be swept away and then to leave it open as you did for the reader to imagine what they wish was awesome! The low tide does linger in the mind, though! This was grand set up imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 24, 2011 at 4:57 AM
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Just like life... unpredictable and always depending on fate... Great poem my friend!!!! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 23, 2011 at 9:33 PM
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lionreign
w Your imagery stands tall. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 23, 2011 at 8:24 PM
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There is always an element of surprise when building sand castles, loved the poem Lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on February 23, 2011 at 6:11 PM
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we should all bild castles in the sand...some might stand forever.
posted by
Kabu
on February 23, 2011 at 2:58 PM
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Lovely, Lionreign. Very enjoyable,
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 23, 2011 at 2:30 PM
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Yes indeed, a rock is a better foundation to build on. I liked this one very much.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 23, 2011 at 2:24 PM
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I bet you built a few in your time Lion reminds me of many years ago thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 11:56 AM
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