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Be easier if I didn't have to put a bit of rhyme in Sam but that the way the brain works.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:12 PM
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Thank you Shobana I might take this on full time if I can buy a tent.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:11 PM
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Right FS all will be revealed or is revealed as I forgot about comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:10 PM
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WEll Chuck I shall have to end it as it happened thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:09 PM
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Have a Kit Kat John I'm always drunk. Do you think in French.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:07 PM
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Re: Hi there, my thoughts are off in many directions at present but I enjoyed
Poor thing try not to worry Kabu.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:03 PM
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Thank you Jay just feeling
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:02 PM
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Thankyou Lion I had forgotten to look at comments Oh Dear!
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2011 at 12:02 PM
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nice poem, I shall look forward to the next instalment
posted by
lionreign
on February 23, 2011 at 7:10 AM
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This really was a nice read, I think most all have some feelings like that to be explored.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 22, 2011 at 10:43 PM
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Hi there, my thoughts are off in many directions at present but I enjoyed
being here for a read.
posted by
Kabu
on February 22, 2011 at 8:33 PM
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as always,I like the intricasies of your thought patterns. however, Im a littlee drunk right now, and all these double entendres are really hopping out at me right now, so im just going to take a break.
posted by
jfm32
on February 22, 2011 at 8:07 PM
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You left us wondering what happened at the end. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 22, 2011 at 7:36 PM
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You are leaving us with quite the image there. I'm curious to see how things materialize.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 22, 2011 at 7:17 PM
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Probing images of the past, a little nostalgia in this poem CC. Great Job.
posted by
shobana
on February 22, 2011 at 6:29 PM
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This is an engaging poem! I can't wait to see how it develops! t really makes an impression and I found myself lost in my own thoughts, too! AWESOME and BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 22, 2011 at 3:48 PM
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