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Re: Cheerygirl
Thank you, it's the way some people choose....
posted by
lionreign
on February 23, 2011 at 7:59 AM
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Well I guess if he needed to go he needed to go... :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 22, 2011 at 10:09 AM
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Re: Some hearts choose to be alone
That is very true, and quite sad, I think.
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:27 AM
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Re: Sinome
thank you sweetie, it was just a passing thought xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:24 AM
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Re: shobana
thank you, that really was a guy who couldn't help but travel...
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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Re: lionreign
thank you Bill, I am very flattered
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you so much, I was trying to keep it ambiguous and unbiased as I could and let people put their own interpretations to it, I love the way that different people see different things in it
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:14 AM
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Some hearts choose to be alone
rather than risk being broken.
posted by
Randir
on February 22, 2011 at 8:13 AM
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Re: lionreign, this really creates the feeling of a rolling stone....
thanks so much Rumor
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:11 AM
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Re: Sounds like Romany verse
Thanks Malcolm, that's an aspect I hadn't thought of
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:07 AM
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Re: Solid poem, even if a bit disparing
thanks Shams-i-Heartsong, that's an interesting perspective
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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Re: THE LIFE OF FREEDOM.....PACK UP YOUR TROUBLE S AND
Thanks Kabu, glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on February 22, 2011 at 7:41 AM
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So uncharacteristically sad for you my friend... but still, so well written. xoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 21, 2011 at 8:27 PM
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It is a sad situation isn't it lion - reminded me of the "Time Travellers's wife". Great poem.
posted by
shobana
on February 21, 2011 at 6:56 PM
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lionreign
¯ Dylan like and poetically beautiful. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 21, 2011 at 5:38 PM
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This is outstanding! I liked how the reader could take it more than one way, I first thought of a tryst, then a vagabond, or just people one has come across in time! Very cool! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 21, 2011 at 12:02 PM
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lionreign, this really creates the feeling of a rolling stone....
and what a smash ending! Great stuff..
....
posted by
Rumor
on February 21, 2011 at 11:26 AM
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Sounds like Romany verse
which really captured the mythical, magical traveller's journey I thought
posted by
malcolm
on February 21, 2011 at 11:21 AM
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Solid poem, even if a bit disparing
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on February 21, 2011 at 10:45 AM
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A bit sad Lion, but some have to move on and on I suppose. Nice poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 21, 2011 at 9:01 AM
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Yes, it speaks of freedom, but it hints of sadness. "No strings attached" is not necessarily the best way. We all need to be needed. Great poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 21, 2011 at 8:32 AM
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THE LIFE OF FREEDOM.....PACK UP YOUR TROUBLE S AND
MOVE ON OUT. GREAT POEM DEAR FRIEND.
posted by
Kabu
on February 21, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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