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So I always pass in spring
when I know she will be gardening.
and she calls, ‘Have a lovely day,’
I REALLY LOVED THE ENDING, JUST ABSOLUTELY PERFECT, IF ONLY SHE KNEW
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 15, 2011 at 9:37 AM
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Thank you Lion we like a flow
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:38 AM
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Don't say that Sam I thought ladies all turned blonde eventually.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:37 AM
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Re: Very touching :)
WEll there wasn't much C.G. but I catch your sentiment.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:35 AM
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Of course Simone don't mind me, I would throw a snowball at you probably
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:34 AM
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Re: Poignant
Thank you Malcolm
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:24 AM
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Lo Justi I guess one wins a liitle and loses a little be happy
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 8:23 AM
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Lovely poem, I especially likes the structure of this, it had an easy flow to it
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2011 at 7:35 AM
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Have a lovely day indeed! One day the gray hair on't matter for her head will be filled with them! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on February 15, 2011 at 6:53 AM
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Very touching :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 15, 2011 at 6:00 AM
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ps. I am surrounded with snow and enjoying it a lot. I guess it was the softness and beauty of all these white ... the thought that though here now I knew it would be mostly gone soon that inspired that poem and since me and my laptop are never too far away, I got my fix of Blogit and shared it :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 15, 2011 at 5:51 AM
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Excellent work CC :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 15, 2011 at 5:44 AM
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Perfect! Have a lovely day!
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 15, 2011 at 4:47 AM
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Poignant
posted by
malcolm
on February 15, 2011 at 1:34 AM
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Re: The loneliness of getting older.....I remember ...it was very funny
Of course just what I was looking for Kabu. You see no one looks pretty if there are drunk and what were you doing in a bar young lady
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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Vivid as a brand new sunrise. Lovely, age is both a reward and a regret. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on February 15, 2011 at 12:10 AM
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Re: CC
Don't forget your knee pads Uncle Albert calls.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:09 AM
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Yes I suppose so F,S, I'll repost it then
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:08 AM
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Re: Poignant longing, CC!...lovely...
Thank you Raye
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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Re: happy valentines day
Thank you poetipb
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:05 AM
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Thank you Shobana,
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:02 AM
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Thank you Janey
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2011 at 12:01 AM
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beautifully written - longing for love - deep within all of us!
posted by
janey_
on February 14, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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She sounds lovely CC..the whole poem is so beautifully depicted.
posted by
shobana
on February 14, 2011 at 7:08 PM
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happy valentines day
posted by
poetjpb
on February 14, 2011 at 6:49 PM
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Poignant longing, CC!...lovely...
posted by
Raye09
on February 14, 2011 at 5:26 PM
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Summer is the perfect scene for this poem!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 14, 2011 at 4:39 PM
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CC
It is nice to kneel on ones knees and play in the grass as the flowers are abounding about as the wind makes each one dance about and to say Have a Nice Day to the Man she saw in the distance far away. Love and Happy Valentines Uncle Albert. Signed Muse
posted by
fememefeme
on February 14, 2011 at 4:02 PM
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The loneliness of getting older.....I remember ...it was very funny
an older woman very drunk looking around a bar and wondering how to possibly compete with all the young fluff........but of course dear friend you we know are a gentleman.
posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2011 at 1:41 PM
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