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PatB
If I could write something like that just for fun I would finally find wealth.
Happy Valentine's Day to you.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 12, 2011 at 11:31 AM
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If this was just for fun...what has he written when he is serious
As much success as we may work hard for ourselves, we wish for more for the next and the next generations that we love. I sometimes I think that I write and publish for others to make money from my work...Anthologies.....to encourage my grandchildren.
posted by
Kabu
on February 12, 2011 at 11:25 AM
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Wonderful! Has he written more?
This is just the greatest!
posted by
TAPS.
on February 12, 2011 at 9:45 AM
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Pat
This is exceptional - a marvellously drawn, vibrantly colourful mating display by the sea (which of course itself is a symbol of life)...and the tension introduced by the lady's casual indifference...
And I completely agree - this must be published, and I'm sure it will be...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 12, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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I say WOW too! An excellent poem, and it does merit being published. Loved it!
posted by
adnohr
on February 12, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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I love this one, Ariala. But my son thinks it was just for fun.
posted by
Pat_B
on February 12, 2011 at 5:34 AM
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Wow, that was excellent! Have you published this?
posted by
Ariala
on February 12, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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