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Re: I would leave her and her piddly little doggie well alone.
Oh dear Kabu that poor little dog didn't pee too much about an egg-cup full. I wish I hadn't mentioned it, but I had just drunk three tins of tonic water and had an empty screen and it was raining and I thought I must write something quickly so I went through some of my wet memories and rode my Motor Scooter into the outback.
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C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:24 AM
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Re: so from smiles to a look of ice and some strange advice, C.C.....
Perhaps I deserved it Rumor, but it didn't have the desired effect,
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C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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Thank you Sam, I must have been a duffer.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:10 AM
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As do all of ours FS.
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C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:09 AM
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Re: CC, these interesting women you encounter,
No but the grandmothers look pretty feisty, which is surprising really
posted by
C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:08 AM
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Well Shobana a lady has to encourage shy young men not flick her tail.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
You don't get bread with one meat ball Wiley.
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C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:03 AM
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Hm, E.E. reality is a bit crude sometimes and I suppose beauty is in the eye etc, Thank you
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C_C_T
on February 12, 2011 at 12:02 AM
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I like the vision at the beginning --- like a Paris portrait ~ woman with thin lead on perhaps a poodle type doggie... Even with a rose, I do believe, the dog may have the last word or pee or bark here dear ChCh --- Yes, this woman sounded lovely but I think her heart was held in check by her puppy love ~ I enjoyed this poem very much; wonderfully creative. E.E.
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elysianfields
on February 11, 2011 at 10:51 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
So did ya get the girl and leave that piddling dog?
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 11, 2011 at 9:02 PM
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The dainty demure lady must have surely loved the rose on her doorstep if anything else. Beautiful poetry here CC.
posted by
shobana
on February 11, 2011 at 7:27 PM
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CC, these interesting women you encounter,
do they have any sisters? - Bob
posted by
2902
on February 11, 2011 at 6:15 PM
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As time goes by, the faults seem to grow...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 11, 2011 at 5:15 PM
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I think this poem is awesome! I was in it the whole way as those it were a vivid dream! Kudos to be able to take the reader along like that! sam
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sam444
on February 11, 2011 at 4:08 PM
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so from smiles to a look of ice and some strange advice, C.C.....
All because of a few words meant in a complimentary way...no, C.C., I wouldn't have looked back at her, and might have been tempted to kick her dog..
...(I can only imagine what the strange advice was, the naughty woman...)
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Rumor
on February 11, 2011 at 3:04 PM
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I would leave her and her piddly little doggie well alone.
lucky it was perhaps a female dog and not one to pee on your leg
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Kabu
on February 11, 2011 at 12:37 PM
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