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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much! xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:39 AM
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Re: Sounds just like a Jazz Club to me. You caught the atmosphere well.
Thank you. I had some troubles writing it but it will be on your blog shortly ;)
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:37 AM
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Re: You describe this scene so well
Thank malcolm, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:32 AM
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Re: This touches many senses effectively
Thanks so much Randir!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:32 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:26 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:24 AM
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Re: Anon_C21
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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Re: elysianfields
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:13 AM
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Re: shobana
I agree completely! Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:09 AM
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Re: UtahJay
thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you so much!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 8:00 AM
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Re: A smokey dive with good soul music or perhaps art Jazz
thanks Kabu
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 7:48 AM
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Re: lionreign, I could almost smell the cigar smoke and hear the jazz....
thanks Rumor, that was pretty much what was in my mind when I was writing this
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 7:41 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thank you, I'm delighted it had that effect
posted by
lionreign
on February 14, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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I was just going to say that you could be writing this out of the French Quarter in New Orleans :-) YOu captured the mellow , consuing and hypnotizing feeling of jazz so well! Happy Valentine sweetie :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 13, 2011 at 9:03 PM
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Sounds just like a Jazz Club to me. You caught the atmosphere well.
Where is your link for the cheerful poem? :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on February 13, 2011 at 1:28 PM
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You describe this scene so well
I can smell the cigar smoke and hear those familiar refrains
posted by
malcolm
on February 13, 2011 at 12:24 PM
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This touches many senses effectively
--I think it is one of your best pieces!
I have added a post, too. It is also about senses, but not jazz.
posted by
Randir
on February 12, 2011 at 2:30 PM
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I love Jazz. And simply I love the way you use your words
Regards, chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 12, 2011 at 10:40 AM
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I'm there, sitting in that bar, listening to the jazz - you describe it so emotively, Lionreign.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on February 12, 2011 at 9:58 AM
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This poem carries nicely along the 'dance rhythm' and is very evocative. Interestingly I have somewhere also a 'jazz' rhythm poem, but different.
posted by
Anon_C21
on February 12, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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Jazz is alright with me and your poem here is filled with emotion and rhythm and movement dear LionR. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 11, 2011 at 10:26 PM
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One is never alone with Jazz playing in the background. Excellent imagery lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on February 11, 2011 at 7:16 PM
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This work even reads like jazz, wonderful.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 11, 2011 at 5:56 PM
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What an exquisite ending! And a magnificent realization! Great poetry here! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 11, 2011 at 3:16 PM
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A smokey dive with good soul music or perhaps art Jazz
hmnnn been there done that loved it.
posted by
Kabu
on February 11, 2011 at 11:22 AM
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Cough cough, Lion I seem to have been there, wasn't really so bad. Enjoy the music.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 11, 2011 at 11:21 AM
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lionreign, I could almost smell the cigar smoke and hear the jazz....
Your imagery is so real...like a scene from a 30's or 40's film with Bogie or Cagney at the bar...
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posted by
Rumor
on February 11, 2011 at 10:05 AM
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lionreign
This made my mind swirl from Egypts street demonstrations to memories from years ago when the bars closed for the night. Awesome poetry.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 11, 2011 at 9:38 AM
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