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Re: I dreamed a wonderful dream
Well perhaps you saw me Kabu I felt like one at times Is that the cat up for sale or is he just looking?.
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:40 AM
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Yes instincts sometimes save a lot of aggro Sam.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:38 AM
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Thank you Chuck glad that you liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:36 AM
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Thank you Shobana, hey this happened yesterday.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:35 AM
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Great FS beware of some Mothers
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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Thank you Justi keep smiling
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:33 AM
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Thank you E,E, some of these things were less than pleasant at the time
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:32 AM
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The little rat Femia, you should have told him he was hopeless. I wouldn't have left you on the sidelines. I hope he trod on her toes.
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:30 AM
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Thank you Lion don't be too generous, I am only a gardener.
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM
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Well Simone if you knew how I felt before I write it thank you
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C_C_T
on February 10, 2011 at 10:24 AM
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------ you are quite a unique writer CC... I love your style :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 10, 2011 at 9:45 AM
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I have to second Elyse, your imagery is innovative and effective - great work
posted by
lionreign
on February 10, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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Dance
I wance taught worked in a dance studio and taught ball room dancing. I enjoyed is very much then I taught a young man all I new I was excited he had come to the studio and when his lessons were finished he went on his way. I found out later he had attended a great ball room dance and took another gal..I learned that day dreaming sometimes puts one in the side line of waiting for a dance. Nice Poem. Femia
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fememefeme
on February 10, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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I like your metaphors ChCh -- 'a girl like pause' --- 'bodice of that transition' - "Orphaned Annie" - this poem is so well written and deep; it's true of how 'those dancing want to dance into their own sweet dream." You have nailed this one dear ChCh with your sharing of wisdom ... E.E.
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elysianfields
on February 10, 2011 at 7:19 AM
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Oh, joy, conquest, repentance, and memory are but a few of the paints of masterpieces in the hands of a poet.... Wonderful work. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Justi
on February 9, 2011 at 10:00 PM
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There are so many layers to the dance that you speak of. This poem covers them well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 9, 2011 at 7:10 PM
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Those dancing always want to dance to their own sweet dreams is so true CC..quite nostalgic CC - Excellent poem.
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shobana
on February 9, 2011 at 6:53 PM
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Enjoyed reading your poem
Thanks for sharing. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 9, 2011 at 6:05 PM
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I know what you mean by things that are better left in the past even though they can be recalled in vivid detail! Great poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 9, 2011 at 3:39 PM
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I dreamed a wonderful dream
or perhaps I just saw a mouse.
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Kabu
on February 9, 2011 at 1:09 PM
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