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I could not bear the pain

I think it was then I found my soul

had death come to take me

 I would have  gone along

 

great poem, some really great lines, may joy come in the morning

posted by Riversidepoet on February 8, 2011 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

I have places that make me fearful,, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 8, 2011 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

 In illness and in weakness everyone faces the demons in life, the darkness and the sorrow - which is why the light is there for us all to seek.  This poem was written with much passion ~ palpably so.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 6, 2011 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

But if you didn't go to those places, you'd not know the exact
significance and beauty of the places you love, I guess?

posted by Straightforward on February 6, 2011 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply