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I liked the rhyme scheme that set up the cadence! And, it is wistful and could be a longing or an appreciation for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2011 at 4:08 AM
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Re: the woman of your dreams, C.C.....
Thank you Rumor Is that what it is called, my memory is lacking sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2011 at 10:42 AM
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Re: CC
WELL I'm not going to argue with you Femia, you have such a sweet way of explaining problems
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2011 at 10:39 AM
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Thank you lion a bit tiring though
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2011 at 10:37 AM
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the woman of your dreams, C.C.....
or pehaps the angel of your dreams....you are a master at creating vivid images and a feeling of wistfulness.
...
posted by
Rumor
on February 7, 2011 at 8:55 AM
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CC
When our heart takes us beyond our dreams and we wonder through the emotions of not knowing sometimes it becomes the fantisy we hold on to the help were looking for. Nice poem . CC. Love Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on February 7, 2011 at 8:49 AM
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I think it's the women of our dreams that give us the passion for those of our awakening. Nice thoughts.
posted by
lionreign
on February 7, 2011 at 7:45 AM
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To dream or not to dream that is the question E.E .
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:52 PM
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Re: Intriguing journey, CC! Love the imagery and flow...
Thank you Raye, trying to make sense of some oldies.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:48 PM
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Re: CC
You are dramatic Wiley, crawling perhaps,
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:46 PM
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Re: seeking joy in little things is significant.
Ms Straightforward I agree with you
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:44 PM
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Thank you Simone, well in the poems perhaps
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:42 PM
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Yes don't forget too FS
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:40 PM
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Re: The angel of your dreams may you never be disappointed.
Hmm, Kabu I think those have flown away.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2011 at 11:39 PM
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This reminds me of a 'flower' to bloom or in bloom - or is it 'love' in bloom? ~ yes, this certainly brings thoughts of Love on wings and of the dreams of sweeter visions - the tousled head or even morning's halo.
This ChCh, actually to me, this is like a clever, Valentine note - E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on February 6, 2011 at 8:10 PM
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Intriguing journey, CC! Love the imagery and flow...
posted by
Raye09
on February 6, 2011 at 7:51 PM
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CC
I have this feeling you'd travel for love alright, even crawlin' over broken glass for a whiff of her flowers old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 6, 2011 at 7:38 PM
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Many travel far to search for love CC. The lone swan awaits I think. Beautiful poem and great imagery.
posted by
shobana
on February 6, 2011 at 6:36 PM
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seeking joy in little things is significant.
posted by
Straightforward
on February 6, 2011 at 5:59 PM
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HOpefully you will remember and she would have been in those dreams... Great poem CC xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 6, 2011 at 4:21 PM
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I feel that it is important to wonder about those things...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 6, 2011 at 2:47 PM
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The angel of your dreams may you never be disappointed.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2011 at 2:14 PM
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