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ah Femia, you make me want to 'stretch' with this one. Such decisions our minds go through as we filter in the morning...the wonder is incredible at times. and that second one opens their eyes and 'sees' all before them is like as you say, 'an awakening' ~ This was very good imagery xoxoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 6, 2011 at 8:58 PM
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Awesome imagery here! Cherish this moment with everything you have!
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 6, 2011 at 6:34 AM
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Lovely imagery Femia, it would be wonderful to snuggle in the warmth of the bed I think.
posted by
shobana
on February 6, 2011 at 2:36 AM
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Nice poem. Every body feels the cold weather
Thanks for sharing. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 5, 2011 at 10:55 PM
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I like the activity at the end of the poem so in this scenario I would opt for the warm blanket and snuggle the morning away! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 5, 2011 at 10:15 AM
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WEll you will soon know Femia as soon as you jump out of bed unless you have the heating on all night. I hope your day is nearly as nice as the moment in time. Nice poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 5, 2011 at 1:26 AM
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