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This means and it is trying to tell you not to mess with perfection!
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 6, 2011 at 5:50 AM
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Very sensuous and engaging Raye - you bring out the passion of the night.
posted by
shobana
on February 5, 2011 at 3:23 AM
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A difficult decision to make, I say.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 4, 2011 at 7:25 PM
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Re: Perfect as is, Raye...beautiful and moving!
Thank you, Ariala!
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 4:20 PM
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Thank you so much, Dear Sam!..
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 4:19 PM
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Perfect as is, Raye...beautiful and moving!
posted by
Ariala
on February 4, 2011 at 1:04 PM
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I like how the night and its ambiance captures the essence of the poem and give its imagery great impetus! It was very clear on the imagery and I suspect that is why it demands to stay the way it is for it has a delicate balance and any tweaking could change everything! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 4, 2011 at 10:13 AM
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Thank you bunches, CC!...
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 7:48 AM
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Re: Raye09
Lol, WileyFriend...Thank you...
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posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Much appreciated, Elyse!...
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Re: Raye09
Thanks so much, Bill..
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Re: and I think that so it should for tis written so well of love and passion
Thank you, Dear Kabu!...
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Yes it is a dignified way of embarking into life's situations Raye and it holds a nice balance.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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Raye09
Your poetry is still chock full of images sensual, Kabu's in trouble.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 3, 2011 at 9:16 PM
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Beautifully written Raye...I wonder how you would - could add to or detract from because this is like a gorgeous portrait rendering; simply beautiful imagery. And the colors are yummy rich - from the arch of the heavens to the 'smell of clover" --- this is gorgeous. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 3, 2011 at 8:41 PM
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Raye09
w I like the clover sleeping love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 3, 2011 at 8:39 PM
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and I think that so it should for tis written so well of love and passion
posted by
Kabu
on February 3, 2011 at 7:28 PM
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