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okayyy I think I need a cold shower! nice work!
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 5, 2011 at 2:25 PM
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CC
I am so happy she got rid of that coarse wollen underwear my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 4, 2011 at 8:02 PM
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Life and yesterday's hold so entrancingly real!
A poetic triumph, CC....
posted by
Raye09
on February 4, 2011 at 6:40 PM
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Well of course Inspired if it does not harm, but then I am probably biased having thought of it.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:57 PM
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Well you see Sam I believe lots of things are available and as you say it doesn't matter if one believes it or not.'
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:53 PM
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Will she accept that the omen was a good thing?
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 4, 2011 at 9:50 AM
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And the moral of the story is the omen that saved! I like how it wrapped up; it doesn't matter whether one believes it to be true or not, it was a grand story that had rich meaning from both perspectives! The detail truly enhances! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 4, 2011 at 8:28 AM
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Re: CC, if this is hasty work, I must learn to rush. - Bob
Well; In don't know if you old boys are beginning to push the boat out a bit too far Bob. Ill be sure and let you know.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 6:10 AM
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CC, if this is hasty work, I must learn to rush. - Bob
posted by
2902
on February 4, 2011 at 12:27 AM
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Goodness Shobana. now didn't you ask in one of your poems about The Code.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:11 AM
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Well E.E. I was a day dreamer and you do romanticize and sometimes the poem writes itself, so I will believe whatever you think.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:08 AM
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Well Simone as much as I would like to be more informative, modesty prevents me from saying other than as old as the poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:02 AM
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Re: Mossy; perhaps all young boys should experience a Mossy in his life
Well it's no use trying to explain things to you Kabu and you forget I have read everything you have written and gained experience of course.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 3, 2011 at 11:57 PM
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Re: I think we've all had a Mossey or two in our lives, C.C....
Well as long as you got the Code Rumor, Oh no you didn't need it
posted by
C_C_T
on February 3, 2011 at 11:54 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Mystery unveiled is no longer so Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on February 3, 2011 at 11:50 PM
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Yes FS but it was cobbled up a bit, it is a bit foolish to write live when in romantic situations, or whatever they are deemed to be, never mind I can cuddle my teddy now.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 3, 2011 at 11:49 PM
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Re: CC
Thank you Femia I will try and remember that and not get frostbitten.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 3, 2011 at 11:44 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
w You create a mood of mystery with touch sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 3, 2011 at 8:48 PM
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Re: I think we've all had a Mossey or two in our lives, C.C....
Oops,
Mossy..I better be careful or she'll be after me for mispelling her name.
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posted by
Rumor
on February 3, 2011 at 8:15 PM
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I think we've all had a Mossey or two in our lives, C.C....
real or fantasy, they taught us much and left us with indelible impressions..
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posted by
Rumor
on February 3, 2011 at 8:13 PM
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Mossy; perhaps all young boys should experience a Mossy in his life
don't know, never been a bloke but tis true one never forgets those clumsy first encounters .....well again I was very protected by my parents.
posted by
Kabu
on February 3, 2011 at 6:49 PM
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The Mossy's in our lives are precious because they stay on as dreams we can always fall back on... Great writing CC... BTW how old were you whe Mossy happened...? xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 3, 2011 at 6:06 PM
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Written quite well ChCh - Mossy was an experience as I read this. A first and very definitely vivid and memorable experience and I can see why. She had 'experience' and the young man was touched - for a lifetime. This is how I see it, believe it and read it. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on February 3, 2011 at 5:53 PM
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Little Mossy took you through an ordeal CC..one more of fantasy I should think.
posted by
shobana
on February 3, 2011 at 5:42 PM
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You took the reader on one incredible ride...I myself feel that it is not uneven at all and flows well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 3, 2011 at 4:41 PM
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CC
The fantasy of thoughts sometimes spin a web as a spider so intricate in detail and yet so dangerous to the victim. Caught in ones desires bring out emotions imbedded within our heart of time going by a memory for the soul. Nicely done UA. Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on February 3, 2011 at 4:32 PM
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