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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you, I do my best...

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nita09
Always a pleasure

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lovelyladymonk
Thank you!

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sink
Thanks 2Philomena

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A lyrical call to the joy of slumber..
Thanks Raye09!

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444
Thanks Sam, I'm delighted you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very fine! It makes me think of the anesthetist's expression, "He's under"
Thanks Bob, I wasn't familiar with that poem but I was thinking of "he's under" when I started writing this...

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley!  I seem to have had that effect...

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign
Thanks BC-A,  I have infected you all with my sleepiness haven't I?

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: you make me wish to curl up in my bed and sleep.
Thanks Kabu, I am a living breathing writing cure for insomnia

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thank you!  xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobana
Thank you

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: elysianfields
Thanks Elyse,  I seem to be putting everyone to sleep with this one

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Cheerygirl
At my best I am like 200mg of valium...    I'm glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Slipping under the noise...

Thanks Randir, glad you liked it

 

(and yes I do like to know... on my way...)

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sweet slumber's sea is a great place to be....
Thanks Rumor, I do like to take trips there often

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CHIFFCHAFF
I think I would sleep on the couch...

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay
It happens to me too sometimes, but almost never in winter, when the temperature is low sleep and I are the most ardent of lovers

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim
thank you

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS
there's nothing like the cold to make sleep more attractive

posted by lionreign on February 7, 2011 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Really beautiful words and rhythm yet again, Lionreign. You never fail.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on February 6, 2011 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for your visit.

posted by Nita09 on February 5, 2011 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Well done!

posted by lovelyladymonk on February 4, 2011 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Sink
Flowing, mellow language.

posted by 2Philomena on February 4, 2011 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

A lyrical call to the joy of slumber..
Unique and soothing - Most excellent, Lionreign!

posted by Raye09 on February 4, 2011 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

This is indeed an awesome way to slide into perfect slumber! Such striking imagery, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 4, 2011 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Another bit of poetry this evokes is the conclusion to Keats' sonnet,
To Sleep: Turn the key deftly in the oil-ed wards,
               and seal the hushed casket of my soul.

posted by 2902 on February 4, 2011 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Another bit of poetry this evokes is the conclusion to Keats' sonnet,

posted by 2902 on February 4, 2011 at 5:42 AM | link to this | reply

Very fine! It makes me think of the anesthetist's expression, "He's under"

posted by 2902 on February 4, 2011 at 12:47 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign
Oh yeah, I'm after that bit of slumber right now seeing as how you made it so attractive.

posted by WileyJohn on February 3, 2011 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

w Me too. Let us rest. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on February 3, 2011 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

you make me wish to curl up in my bed and sleep.

posted by Kabu on February 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on February 3, 2011 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

So restful lionreign..Very nicely written.

posted by shobana on February 3, 2011 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

 very very sweet into Slumber.  makes me want to 'rest' a while.  Beautifully composed and written, Lion.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 3, 2011 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Well it made me feel like slipping off to sleep. Nice and relaxing. Very enjoyable Lionreign :)

posted by Cheerygirl on February 3, 2011 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

Slipping under the noise...

into dreams you can almost see coming, like the White Rabbit, and simply following...

(There is a new chapter to the story that ended with wistful partings--thought you might like to know.)

posted by Randir on February 3, 2011 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

sweet slumber's sea is a great place to be....
especially when we're craving and needing that sleep.....

posted by Rumor on February 3, 2011 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

That's how I feel at the foot of the stairs Lion can I climb up the rigging . Nice little poem

posted by C_C_T on February 3, 2011 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

I like this. Many times I have been to that place where sleep cannot be found no matter how tired my eyes.

posted by UtahJay on February 3, 2011 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Good imagination Thanks for sharing. Regards, Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on February 3, 2011 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

That's how I felt last night when I climbed beneath my mountain of covers on a bitterly cold, sub-zero night.

posted by TAPS. on February 3, 2011 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply