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If knowing how to write involves skill
in springing surprises, you're very, very good. (I can only hope that a great part of you talent is also making up stuff that isn't true!).
ps - Might it improve things if you changed "that" to "this" in the last line? Just a thought. - Bob
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on January 31, 2011 at 2:21 AM
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