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w Then I want to make someone happy love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on January 30, 2011 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

Your poem almost throbs
with truth and wisdom.  I wished it could be more polished, finished-feeling, but maybe that's not possible.  I'm hapy to have read it.   - Bob

posted by 2902 on January 30, 2011 at 2:19 AM | link to this | reply