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It was a toughie Raye, but you swam on and on you deserved the golden shore.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 29, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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THANK YOU ALL!
posted by
Raye09
on January 29, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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u A wonderful use of sight and mind love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 29, 2011 at 2:48 AM
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Raye.. yes, happy Friday... I agree. Expressed so beautifully...I feel the sadness and understanding in your poem.
The mending begins when the broken pieces drift away.
posted by
yellowrose55
on January 28, 2011 at 7:23 PM
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Very pretty and clever :)
posted by
calia14
on January 28, 2011 at 7:15 PM
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You touch upon the senses, especially that of touch very well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 28, 2011 at 4:42 PM
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Glad you are having a happy day. Interesting read :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 28, 2011 at 3:15 PM
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you do sound positive and I think writing out how you have been feeling
is such good therapy and makes sense to many of us who have had tough times along the way.
posted by
Kabu
on January 28, 2011 at 2:09 PM
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I am so happy you are having a good day! I love this line:
mine essence is separate from lore. Right on! The imagery was so superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 28, 2011 at 1:28 PM
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