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Re: No penalty that I can see
Thank you Raye I actually sneaked back and changed a word late last night.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 26, 2011 at 1:20 AM
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Thanks Sam " GRRR" Hows that. Better check my blood pressure.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 26, 2011 at 1:19 AM
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No penalty that I can see
I think you and Uncle A. are both good sports and delightful gents; so carry on...:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 25, 2011 at 2:03 PM
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You betcha! Here ya go
; now I want one too! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on January 25, 2011 at 12:57 PM
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Give me a hug Sam , some funny vibes around.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:55 PM
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Re: the voice....hmnnnn intereting imagery and rhythme
Don't say it Kabu It is Uncle Albert again if he is willing.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:53 PM
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Hmm, FS I'm going to start knitting a vest.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:52 PM
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Thank you Simone I feel a little hostility creeping in. Not from you of course. How many fleas do you think a camel is worth?
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:50 PM
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Right Shobana I am leaving with a nervous break down . Uncle Albert must take over.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:46 PM
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Re: Why..?....
Raye I don't really mind what anyone says and I loved your snappy reply. Of course I don't always mean what I say it is the penalty of writing in the first person I shall have to get Uncle Albert back I think he can take a bit of stick.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:44 PM
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Re: Well Chiff Chaff you know just what to say to get yourself into trouble
Dear me C,G there they are plonking them into every photo. It is just unfortunate that you have a good memory if you had ever seen a gypsy woman feeding a child and eating fish and chips at the same time. I can assure you I always think of people as being transparent. Now C G. was that a joke or do you want me to censor future poems.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:40 PM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Yes a soft hand is noticable Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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Well that is good news Lion, gets a bit hairy sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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Thank you E.E. perhaps we spill little things that we do not know existed or do we write for the perceived effect. I hope not, to write for one's self should be the aim or not to dislike what one has written and never to be satisfied probably.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:27 PM
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Re: C.C...watch out for those voices you hear....
Help Rumor, I have got to answer these ladies and it wasn't my voice.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2011 at 12:20 PM
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C.C...watch out for those voices you hear....
I'd stick with being a male if I was you, however..
..the poem is quite the switch-up, but you never miss a beat even when tackling an offbeat topic.....well done, as always.
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posted by
Rumor
on January 25, 2011 at 12:12 PM
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Ah CC --- but you do write so well with imagery and your feelings expressed - in good rhythm. I see in the imagery shades of a Mother in the blues and that sacrifice - and I do read and sense the 'loneliness'; of how women and men are yes, different - Your pen writes a bit of indifference or of differences, but tender is the night and a blossom surely will bloom. This poem makes me ponder,CC ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 25, 2011 at 9:03 AM
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I like this a great deal
posted by
lionreign
on January 25, 2011 at 8:45 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Ï A soft hand tells you everything that you appreciate sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 25, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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Well Chiff Chaff you know just what to say to get yourself into trouble
by the comments below ha ha. I think maybe you might consider less talk about womens breasts as in the poem before this one... something that seems to be aluded to here and there in your writings.... but think us women as something lovely by all means.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 25, 2011 at 2:23 AM
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Why..?....
Perfume and prettiness
smooth as silk, dainty wittiness
toil to turn a head, open an eye
get a smile, a whistle or a wink
from the male, get their attention on the sly
they won't listen if you don't glisten
and how can they love you if they don't wish to look
again and again and...
Sorry, CC, couldn't resist, hope you don't mind my take on the male mind, lol..well, in jest, anyway....Your poem is thought provoking and well written!..:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 24, 2011 at 8:49 PM
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CC, that voice has shown you what it takes to be a woman, even it a bit condescending and I must say there is more to a woman that good looks and a heart that melts :) I loved how the bloom is pressed into the wrist. Good poetry here.
posted by
shobana
on January 24, 2011 at 7:29 PM
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That voice does not think much of women does it
:-) for we are so much more than perfume and designer labels... actually we also wrap about ourselves the ache of desire
and know how many fleas to trade for a camel
loll That voice of yours and I should talk
. But the writing... your writing makes it all plausible... its so well done... Fabulous poem CC
posted by
Sinome
on January 24, 2011 at 5:36 PM
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Such a realistic conversation you provide for us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 24, 2011 at 4:44 PM
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the voice....hmnnnn intereting imagery and rhythme
posted by
Kabu
on January 24, 2011 at 2:04 PM
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I like the uncanniness of the voice! It game gave great impetus to the poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 24, 2011 at 11:02 AM
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