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Heartfelt
Very enjoyable again.
posted by
malcolm
on January 23, 2011 at 10:12 AM
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Re: C.C. That is so beautiful
Thank you Justi I am glad that bit was likeable
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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C.C. That is so beautiful
These two lines just picked up the wide ribbon of love and brought it along.
. Skies of bright subsconscious blue
. I have love's color in my youthful eyes
All of it was so wonderful, thanks for sharing.
posted by
Justi
on January 23, 2011 at 3:56 AM
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Re: A very lovely poem Chiff Chaff.
Thank you C.G. you are the last comment this morning, I have a radiator but my legs are frozen. I think half an hours rough digging is called for. I know that you go cycling I have a stationary one but I usually only do 250 pedal turns before I am bored how far would I get if I had to come back the same way and wanted to return home. I do peddle fiercely to get it over.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:35 AM
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Thank you Sam I am glad you can shout
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:24 AM
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Well we are all a bit crazy Simone. I will change the end the trouble it is harder to leave a meaning sometimes when one wants to end the poem. As I told Shobana if anyone starts quoting foriegn lingo I shall have to reply in slang, or old country sayings.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:22 AM
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Re: Lovely !! - Ash
Thank you Ash
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:13 AM
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Re: what a joyful little song this is I just loved it...full of promise of
Yea kid you have got too be tough when you are 22.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:13 AM
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Re: too bad the joy seems to run out in that last stanza, C.C.
Cuddle them unfortunately Rumor.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:11 AM
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Well of course you do FS it is Nature trying to tie you in quickly it is nothing to do with reality if you had been a hundred miles away it would have probably happened in a different scenario.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:10 AM
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Re: How youthful and pure, CC!
I guess there is always one Raye where the flowers always bloom.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:06 AM
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What is time Wiley, I suppose we measure it in our need for happiness.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:04 AM
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Dear me Shobana that's a bit too strong have you any Pinor Noir.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2011 at 1:02 AM
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What gorgeous imagery CC and it is safe to dream you know. .here's toasting an imagery wine to you too
posted by
shobana
on January 22, 2011 at 9:43 PM
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"Alight with love and doubly bleesed;" we are to have you hear to read and maybe even learn a thing or too my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 22, 2011 at 8:15 PM
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How youthful and pure, CC!
Reading this was akin to being transported back to my first love...perfect!
posted by
Raye09
on January 22, 2011 at 7:07 PM
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I have felt at times that in light of what was to come I was better off not having had those moments.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2011 at 4:13 PM
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too bad the joy seems to run out in that last stanza, C.C.
would you really want to replace those moments, or could you hold onto them as a bittersweet memory?.....anyway, enough joy in the first few stanzas to go around..
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posted by
Rumor
on January 22, 2011 at 2:33 PM
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what a joyful little song this is I just loved it...full of promise of
Spring, of love and a future and a lad eager to embrace it.
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2011 at 11:33 AM
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Lovely !! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 22, 2011 at 11:25 AM
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You write so nicely and the moments you describe are truly wonderful... I don't understand though why do you at the end say you would replace them... I guess its poetic liscence :-) In Spanish they say: " De poeta y loco , todos tenemos un poco" which means we are all a little bit poetic and a little bit crazy :-) ANyway, its a beautiful poem :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 22, 2011 at 11:19 AM
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Safe indeed! I really like these lines, they set the poem in motion for me:
Golden threads were formed and spun
To hold the memory of this day. BRAVO!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 22, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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A very lovely poem Chiff Chaff.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 22, 2011 at 10:22 AM
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