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This is stupendous! I liked how yo put it together in couplets and they flowed so marvelously! KUDOS! I am struggling to catch up these past two days! I felt fine yesterday on the sedative but today has been a challenge! If I do not get you caught up tonight I know I will tomorrow! How have you been? sam
posted by
sam444
on January 21, 2011 at 9:36 PM
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Very vivid and immediate, I loved the melancholy after taste of this one
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:50 AM
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Re: One time
Well you were a child once weren't you a little girl said to me when she was swinging on a gate. I felt like you when she was swinging. Bob BoB Bob Bob Just disguising this comment.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 21, 2011 at 6:46 AM
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Re: Such lovely imagery, CC!
Yes it always seems nicer to fall asleep when one should not, just ten minutes,
posted by
C_C_T
on January 21, 2011 at 6:43 AM
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One time
Great, CC! You had me sweating!
posted by
2902
on January 21, 2011 at 2:57 AM
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Such lovely imagery, CC!
The power of youth (heart and soul emotions) stir later hours to awakening..yes, I'm up at 2 a.m. Fell asleep too early last night I guess....:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 21, 2011 at 12:25 AM
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Re: CC
Well dear finality is not always wise to envisage, but sometimes one knows the answer.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:53 PM
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Thank you Shobana, have a nice weekend.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:49 PM
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Well if you will keep making me feel sad with your poems Simone. How sweet a glass of water in the desert.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:46 PM
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Re: filled with emotions, and very passionate, C.C.....
Yes Rumor and it is still Winter these are good pills that I take
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:40 PM
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Hi FS hope you are keeping OK thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:38 PM
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Re: The passion of youth if only in the mind most of the time
yes must not stay there too long Kabu no one is
unique
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:36 PM
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CC
Interesting poem it made me wonder as your dreamth your dream and that cotton dress. Ones vision and emotions are sometimes brought up in a moment to dream on and on. To remember and play it again in your thoughts to its finality. Very passionate dreamer. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on January 20, 2011 at 10:16 PM
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Think the poem is really passionate too.. CC. Very lovely.
posted by
shobana
on January 20, 2011 at 6:55 PM
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Very sad and ladden with emotion Cc... Hmmm I think you can use a hug ((((((CC)))))) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 20, 2011 at 5:50 PM
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filled with emotions, and very passionate, C.C.....
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posted by
Rumor
on January 20, 2011 at 5:39 PM
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You do such a fine job at covering the different emotions of the speaker.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 20, 2011 at 4:15 PM
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The passion of youth if only in the mind most of the time
You captured so many true feelings.
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2011 at 2:52 PM
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