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The anticipation and yearning is evident throughout these lines ~ Wonderfully written dear Lion - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 28, 2011 at 9:43 AM
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Sweet poem :) I guess we'll never know if it was her or not :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 22, 2011 at 11:37 AM
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And if it were her it would be as they say, the rest is history! I love this poem! It has sweet essence about it! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 21, 2011 at 9:00 PM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you! You are entirely welcome.. .I just speak my mind
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:58 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you! oh you are so lucky to live with such beauty
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:56 AM
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Re: lionreign, you've captured that "nervous wait" perfectly....
Thanks Rumor! I wasn't sure about this one so I am delighted to see such positive feedback
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:52 AM
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Re: exciting, romantic.well done
thanks Kabu!
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:50 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
and one can't have too many options... thank you
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:39 AM
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Re: Your longing and hope are lovely and lyrical, Lionreign!
Thanks Raye09!
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:37 AM
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Re: Riversidepoet
That is a very good point - thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:35 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you so much, the thought of bereaved people had not occurred to me but I can see what you mean. This was actually inspired by a painting of the same name by Leonid Afremov (my favourite artist)
posted by
lionreign
on January 21, 2011 at 6:32 AM
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Vividly expressed!
Thanks for your kind comment!
posted by
Nita09
on January 20, 2011 at 9:17 PM
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I Hope it is her too for your sake..such suspense in this poem lionreign..and thank you for the comment in my poem. I just had to tell you that the Green Arc is the entrance to my home and each day as we pass it, we never tire at its beauty.
posted by
shobana
on January 20, 2011 at 7:02 PM
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lionreign, you've captured that "nervous wait" perfectly....
the hope and expectancy....and we catch a glimpse of her coming in the distance, she is so real...
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posted by
Rumor
on January 20, 2011 at 3:31 PM
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exciting, romantic.well done
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2011 at 12:02 PM
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Yes don't waste the opportunity Lion. Although sometimes as you know hope keeps the options open. Well done
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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Your longing and hope are lovely and lyrical, Lionreign!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 11:13 AM
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I HOPE IT IS HER TOO, WITHOUT HOPE WHERE WOULD WE BE.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 20, 2011 at 9:19 AM
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I think this happens to many people who are bereaved. They see a figure in the distance and are convinced it's the loved one, despite knowing that they have died. But in your poem, the loved one is very much alive and the love is there for all to see. lovely poem, Lionreign.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on January 20, 2011 at 8:52 AM
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