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VERY INTERESTING, MAKES ONE THINK

posted by Riversidepoet on January 19, 2011 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

This is very good! I liked the way things were taken from one side of the fence and placed on the other which made for a bold contrast! It's one of those poems for me where a group could sit down and pick it apart and it would seem endless the avenues to pursue, one leading to another! And then concluding how could that much be in so few words! The poem expands the mind, expanding thought so well done! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 19, 2011 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

Okay

posted by Kabu on January 18, 2011 at 6:26 PM | link to this | reply

Very original!

posted by Raye09 on January 18, 2011 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

posted by chris2303 on January 18, 2011 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on January 18, 2011 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply