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This is quite complex and very haunting
posted by
lionreign
on January 19, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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goodbyes are never easy, C.C.....
you've captured some of the sadness, wistfulness, and even the bitterness in doing so..
..very well done....
posted by
Rumor
on January 19, 2011 at 7:53 AM
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Well I covered my eyes through the naughty bit but read the rest. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 19, 2011 at 6:52 AM
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Thank you E.E. The more I think about how the mind works, I suppose it tries to do its best.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:54 AM
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Re: CC
I concede defeat Wiley Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:50 AM
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Shobana dear, like falling leaves never deliberately mislead, ones sins will always find you out. Sorry I'm a bit ratty today, but it's the pills I think.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:49 AM
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No it is a prob sometimes FS but people are much the same in batches.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:45 AM
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Re: Poignant with a sense of something unfinished..
Thank you Raye, yes I expect so, just got to drag out of it.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:43 AM
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Hi Sam a pity when I am in my rocking chair I can only see the ceiling
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2011 at 5:42 AM
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For me the falling and covering with leaves was like a blanket of putting the past and missed opportunities and the like quietly to rest! It felt like dealing with loss but closure seemed present as well! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 19, 2011 at 2:22 AM
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Poignant with a sense of something unfinished..
simply my feeling after reading..Deep work, CC..
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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So many things can be said and thought about those events. Sometimes I find myself not sure how to feel when I look back at particular moments and eras of my life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 18, 2011 at 7:02 PM
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A beautiful poem CC, the ending was just superb..but I don't know if falling leaves will cover those feelings endured.
posted by
shobana
on January 18, 2011 at 6:22 PM
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CC
Well those falling soft leaves kind of bury the relationship gently old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 18, 2011 at 4:28 PM
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ChCh - I so hate goodbyes - but as you say with the sun and the leaves to come and go and the many more images to follow, to add more memory - goodbyes and memories do just as this - filter in and gain recognition only to leave us with another end. This poem is touching to me. Truly ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 18, 2011 at 2:52 PM
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THE OLDER I GET THE MORE FROM THE PAST POPS INTO MY HEAD.
SOME OF IT I WISH WOULDN'T.
posted by
Kabu
on January 18, 2011 at 1:02 PM
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