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Thank you EE. it is only rewriting old poems belonging to my frustrated youth. I think. Like the strong arm of the woman, I expect it was needed in those days.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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Re: CC
All right Femia I'm not that exciting it is all in the mind, but it is tingly
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:54 AM
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Please Simone don't
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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Re: it had to have been the first woman, C.C. .....
Funny, It must have been that darned Muse Rumor.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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Yes John I would be that naive to gain a few brownies it all has to be scrutinized by the au pair. She did say perhaps you commented after you poured the second libation. Not my comment the shimmering image'
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posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:49 AM
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In another dimension FS I'm sure that's what you mean.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:37 AM
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Well no good you reading it Wiley if you have had such joy.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:35 AM
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Now Sam you know I am an old misery
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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It is a simple one Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:33 AM
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Well I don't know about sitting on it C. G. I can't get near the cat it is a runner if I pick up any thing unusual . Two people came round about a year ago with posters. "have you seen Fluffy.' 'I'll have a photo.' I said and pinned it on the kitchen wall. They stood waiting expectantly and Fluffy walked round for her tea. 'That's Fluffy' they said and looked at me quizzically. "yes" I replied, 'She's been here three months after taking a years holiday, but she didn't like her flea collar. Go on take her.' The young man approached Fluffy and she vanished.' I told them they would have to come round in the morning when she was being fed and make friends again. They never came back.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:32 AM
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Re: Being in the moment is priceless indeed, CC...
Thank you Raye pleased that you feel better
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:18 AM
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Thank you
Lion
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2011 at 10:17 AM
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This one is gorgeous, a very beautiful poem
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:31 AM
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Being in the moment is priceless indeed, CC...
This is excellent work; wistful yet celebratory in a sense - warm, heartfelt and so real...lovely effect, kudos!
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 6:12 AM
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Hello Chiff Chaff - Enjoyed your comments on yesterdays blog. Glad your pets are enjoying all your loveing care. It would be lovely if you could take a photo of your pets they sound like great characters Chiff Chaff. Try rubbing a new pillow that you want your cat to sleep on over it's body repeatedly and sitting it o it so it can smell familiar. It will help it choose that so you can take away the old one you don't like. :) I did enjoy your comments and I must say I do enjoy your stories Chiff Chaff even your grumbles :) LOL
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 18, 2011 at 5:39 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
Y This describes my idea of creation sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 18, 2011 at 2:21 AM
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I might have to dub thee a romantic poet C.C.! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 17, 2011 at 8:21 PM
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That bit "The wonder began as emotion stripped imagination asunder." is the poetic history of my life. LOL Great poetry old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 17, 2011 at 8:13 PM
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I say that anything is possible no matter how hard...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 17, 2011 at 4:40 PM
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PS: 1st read thought I read "a look that twisted from the 1st woman"--and it sounded like something you'd write. Pardone..
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jfm32
on January 17, 2011 at 2:54 PM
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I read the first line and burts out laughing. I thought it said "the first twisted thought from a woman" --which wouldn't have been beyond you. So, ok. I wasn't wearing my glases. As i re-read (2nd Libation)--this touch-and-goingness of words and concepts adds up in a shimmering image--leaving not a thought but a sense of feeling that always seems somehow to evade itself. Quite a painting.
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jfm32
on January 17, 2011 at 2:48 PM
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it had to have been the first woman, C.C. .....
You've hit a high note in the "romantic" department with this one..
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posted by
Rumor
on January 17, 2011 at 2:39 PM
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Romantic & imaginative! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 17, 2011 at 2:36 PM
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THis is a great poem... You are a true romantic :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 17, 2011 at 2:31 PM
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CC
The fortune of being a Muse is as the first woman to be felt by your touch. The embrace of being the first of romantic endeavors. Blessins Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on January 17, 2011 at 1:01 PM
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between you and Elyse you paint such a gift here thanks you dears.
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2011 at 12:37 PM
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ChCh --- by first line I envisioned:
and line by line this speaks of fortune, wings - I see that of Heavenly thoughts, including your last line --- the first woman. Ideally written. I find your poetry so touching these days. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 17, 2011 at 12:14 PM
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