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Re: Very nice. Nice uplifting ending as well. :)
Thanks Cheerygirl, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:55 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks BC-A
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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Re: sam444
Absolutely, both figuratively and literally! Thanks Sam
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:48 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you, sadly I have no talent at all for music
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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Re: UtahJay
just a few more weeks now and Spring will be here...
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:35 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks sweetie, I am looking forward to those bright blossoms xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:32 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:27 AM
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Re: elysianfields
Thanks you so much dear friend, you know me and Spring - I always look forward to it and always enjoy it, it gets my creativity flowing again after Winter's struggles and renews my energy...
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Re: This is tremendous poetry...I was just outside shovelling
thanks Kabu, Spring is peeking around winter's skirts here, but when I wrote this one we were ice bound and I wanted a reminder that Spring was coming...
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:14 AM
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Re: Riversidepoet
wow, thank you so much, I am flattered that you want to put it on your fridge
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:12 AM
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Re: lionreign, very nice imagery....
Thanks Rumor, I wrote this one to cheer myself up when I was feeling all wintered out...
posted by
lionreign
on January 18, 2011 at 7:09 AM
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Very nice. Nice uplifting ending as well. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 18, 2011 at 5:57 AM
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lionreign
Y I hear you. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on January 18, 2011 at 2:16 AM
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In summation, and marvelous imagery, it's like it doesn't matter how bleak it gets we know it will be better by spring! This was a fantastic read, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 17, 2011 at 7:43 PM
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You know this could be a beautiful song..looks like Spring is much awaited here.
posted by
shobana
on January 17, 2011 at 7:01 PM
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Each day I look out my window in the hopes of seeing Mr. Robin Redbreast, I know he is on his way.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 17, 2011 at 6:35 PM
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Such a wonderful poem Neil... and Indeed everything will be alright sweetie, and soon more birds will sing and all trees will bloom with the coming of your Spring... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 17, 2011 at 2:52 PM
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Well they love this Lion, it is a good one, well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 17, 2011 at 12:32 PM
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YAY and Bravo ~ yes cast your lines to the air of Springtime...my goodness this sang out like a Harbinger of Great news ~ I believe with you, Spring is just around the corner. Adored this passionate write, Lion ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 17, 2011 at 12:15 PM
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This is tremendous poetry...I was just outside shovelling
and it is so cold, the place groans and cracks. But you give hope for the Spring even if it is still very mid winter.
posted by
Kabu
on January 17, 2011 at 12:10 PM
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That bleak Winter, shivers in terror
Whenever he hears a bird sing
In case the singer is the bearer
Of word of the return of Spring.
OH MAN I LOVE THIS POEM, WITH YOUR PERMISSION I WILL MAKE A COPY AND PLACE IT ON THE REFRIG OR SOMEWHERE WHERE I CAN SEE IT. ABSOLUTELY JUST GORGEOUS, A MASTERPIECE TO MY WAY OF THINKING.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 17, 2011 at 12:03 PM
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lionreign, very nice imagery....
I clearly see Winter quaking in his boots, checking his time to see how many days he has left, and he has good reason to tremble..
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posted by
Rumor
on January 17, 2011 at 8:52 AM
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