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posted by
Star5_
on January 16, 2011 at 2:42 PM
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At first it was the colors of life for I loved the words choices and placement! Then I really liked the play on words! Then I thought she must be coy or he may have had the thoughts in his mind and never made them audible! all in all it was a fine poem for it has many elements to it that touch all the senses almost equally! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 16, 2011 at 11:16 AM
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Thank you Femia I would send you a yellow rose, but it would be better to plant a rose bush.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 11:00 AM
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Thank you Simone may your words have wings.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:57 AM
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Well E.E One is safer to stay in vogue as long as one can. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:56 AM
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Re: the tide flows before us, lapping life away........I wish I had written
Go on Kabu don't be so modest, you could do it if you really wanted to do so. I am afraid there is one condition, well you don't have oysters very often do you,
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:53 AM
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Go on Wiley I bet you tell all the girls that
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:49 AM
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Thank you FS It has passed
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM
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Justi if ever I do, It will be like me making a roly poly pudding, but you shall have the first of the press.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:47 AM
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Well Shobana you are a romantic,but thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:44 AM
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A quick resume you put the marks over. Some are instant Bob some such as this is worked over perhaps ten times , basically we cannot really write about that which we have not experienced we need a nucleus or a germ of an idea. Maybe she wasn't that desirable in one sense but she was intellectual and that was heavy stuff to one such as the writer, so she didn't get married and one fills in the gaps with imagination probably to gain something that he no longer seeks. OK buddy.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:42 AM
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Re: A very special poem.
Thank you C.G no queries never mind Bob has taken it upon himself.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 10:26 AM
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A very special poem.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 16, 2011 at 9:24 AM
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she whom
Another evocative poem I'd like to understand better, CC.
posted by
2902
on January 16, 2011 at 4:55 AM
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She whomsoever you write this poem for holds such passion in your heart CC - just gorgeous.
posted by
shobana
on January 16, 2011 at 1:52 AM
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CC
You are a wonderful poet. I want one of your books of poetry when you publish. This was so great.
posted by
Justi
on January 15, 2011 at 11:10 PM
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It's interesting how time passes in this poem that you have written and shared with us all.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 15, 2011 at 5:44 PM
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CC
Well I haveta tell ya the blizzard outside just melted with the heat flowin' outta that poetry old chap. Phew,
I cooled off now that I went out.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 15, 2011 at 2:42 PM
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the tide flows before us, lapping life away........I wish I had written
that.....but then some of you wonderful poets here. I am always wishing that. LOL.
Enjoyed this C.C.
posted by
Kabu
on January 15, 2011 at 2:05 PM
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ChCh - I like the colors in this warmth and bright and well, this whole poem is beautiful. So soft and yes, as Sinome writes, 'tender' ~ I like your romantic poetry, much. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 15, 2011 at 12:24 PM
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wow... that was gorgeous... so tender and ladden with the nagging pain of something unfnished... Lovely writing CC xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 15, 2011 at 12:01 PM
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CC
Very romantic and a pick of a flower as your yellow rose to bloom in a romantic fragrance of affection and love.Nicely done UA. Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on January 15, 2011 at 11:29 AM
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