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I want to steal this quatrain and put it in a poem; it just moved me deeply!
When reaching far beyond the first perimeter,
the way is defined by a passionate exploitation
it cannot be changed at an instant inclination
or be discarded; unless stored in various guises.
I just love this!!!!!!!! BRAAAAAAVVVVVOOOOO!!! sam 
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2011 at 2:35 PM
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Thank you every one for your kind comments I just don't feel like doing much today, I thought I would just cut out return comments and read your work. Thank you again.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 13, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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beautiful poem, I think this is one of my favourites of yours
posted by
lionreign
on January 13, 2011 at 7:00 AM
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A sensitive poem. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 13, 2011 at 6:39 AM
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Take your choice.
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it very much.
posted by
MsJudy
on January 12, 2011 at 10:19 PM
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You know ChCh you always surprise me --- changes, choice, this is so deep and makes me ponder - oddly enough just last night I was having a talk with my daughters on 'choice' and the therebe or thereafter. This is very good writing and wisdom you share ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 12, 2011 at 10:02 PM
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Man can make his plans, but God directs his steps.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on January 12, 2011 at 9:48 PM
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Very philosophical my friend... True wise words :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 12, 2011 at 9:47 PM
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true we live and learn from experience, though not an immediate discovery, patience is a virtue, good will come of it eventually
posted by
eburns111
on January 12, 2011 at 7:49 PM
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CC:
"The best laid plans of mice and men etc." your poetry tonight brings that to mind for some reason.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 12, 2011 at 6:38 PM
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Oh yes, life does not always work out as planned.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 12, 2011 at 3:13 PM
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I never make plans anymore...unless I have to buy a plane ticket.
posted by
Kabu
on January 12, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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we make choices based on facts and sometimes on visions, C.C...
All too often our visions are clouded and melt or fade away, but choices based on fact usually, but not always pan out....
any way we look at it, life is full of choices and we're the ones who have to make them....
posted by
Rumor
on January 12, 2011 at 2:11 PM
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No truer words were ever spoken.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 12, 2011 at 12:19 PM
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