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ChCh this is so vivid with imagery that I could not pick out one line that didn't show something to 'see' and yet, your words write like a flame ablaze...they light and then they flame --- and then another shadow or silhouette takes shape ~ I do like this poem...so passionate and deep. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 10, 2011 at 11:04 PM
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Re: a true weaver of poetry and poetic imagery once again, C.C...
Cheers Rumor the night has wings.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:08 PM
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Generous comment but thank you Lion.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:06 PM
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Re: bruised ghost
Thank you Malcolm as you know writing is not easy sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:05 PM
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a true weaver of poetry and poetic imagery once again, C.C...
great to read this and just let my imagination wander.
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posted by
Rumor
on January 10, 2011 at 9:52 AM
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Very clever use of metaphor with some very creative imagery - bravo my friend
posted by
lionreign
on January 10, 2011 at 7:36 AM
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bruised ghost
conjures up such a powerful feeling
posted by
malcolm
on January 10, 2011 at 7:03 AM
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Re: You weaver of poetry Chiff Chaff :)
Comes from working working in mill lass.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:23 AM
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Thank you Simone, if the colours are there who can resist.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:20 AM
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Thank you F.S I am surprised at the different reactions.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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Re: Taps
Crikey Taps that's a bit realistic but No worse I suppose than rearing Piggy in a sty and then eating him
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:16 AM
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Re: Sam
I guess so Sam it is something to live with
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:13 AM
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Re: Poem
Thank you LB Glad that you liked it
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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Thank you Shobana you see the best in every thing
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:10 AM
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Re: Tallyho old chap................ good hunting what.
Now Kabu we must show a sense of decorum over these matters.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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Re: CC
You astound me Wiley i thought they had all been taken,
posted by
C_C_T
on January 10, 2011 at 12:05 AM
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Beautiful verses CC - "you may breathe close to a heart and listen" and yes indeed time can sometimes be cruel.
posted by
shobana
on January 9, 2011 at 7:13 PM
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Poem
Beautiful poem..I enjoyed it very much.
posted by
MsJudy
on January 9, 2011 at 6:39 PM
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Slips back indeed; the ghosts never seem to go away; only quieted! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 9, 2011 at 5:53 PM
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Since my dad was a hunter what I saw as I read your poem was the real thing--the woods, the startled animal, the swish or bang, the whop, the floundering, the blood, the limp carcass, the hide, the feathers, the food on the table. I had pretty much forgotten all that; I put it out of my mind as I eat my barbeque these days. You do have a way of bringing things to mind.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 9, 2011 at 4:32 PM
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You weaver of poetry Chiff Chaff :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 9, 2011 at 3:51 PM
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Loved the way you weaved this one :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 9, 2011 at 3:14 PM
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The images flow well together and create an awesome scene.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 9, 2011 at 2:51 PM
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Tallyho old chap................ good hunting what.
posted by
Kabu
on January 9, 2011 at 12:43 PM
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CC
Great hunting poetry especially as I view the prey to be a luscious lady
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 9, 2011 at 12:30 PM
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