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excellent dialogue and interaction --- great visuals - but truly ChCh I don't want to bring up piles again (as you know what happened my last comments) LOL but truly I cannot figure out who's going to marry whom here. I will read on. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 6, 2011 at 12:18 PM
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SOUNDS LIKE GOOD ADVICE
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 6, 2011 at 7:42 AM
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Real kitchen sink drama!
Loved the ending of course
posted by
malcolm
on January 6, 2011 at 2:09 AM
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Re: CC
Thank you Justi Hope you feel better.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 6, 2011 at 12:47 AM
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Re: cute little dialogue, C.C.....
Oh dear Rumor I am losing my marbles Mikey was waiting for the mother.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 6, 2011 at 12:45 AM
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Re: Knowing you CC I was looking to see where the punchline was going to
Goodness C.G you must read more carefully Sally is married she is going to get her husband's tea Mikey wants to marry her Mother.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 6, 2011 at 12:43 AM
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CC
What an absolute delight! I have missed reading and writing. I will come again and catch up. Have a great year!
posted by
Justi
on January 5, 2011 at 10:41 PM
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First time hearing a man running into matrimony! What a delightful poem! It's like get it in before the mood falls apart but then real life is still encompassing! The mom at the factory was too precious! A ton of role reversal for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2011 at 7:34 PM
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Knowing you CC I was looking to see where the punchline was going to
be... when it didn't arrive I reviewed it all and decided it must be part of the whole thing. Is more coming of it tomorrow?
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 5, 2011 at 4:53 PM
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cute little dialogue, C.C.....
One can sense the innocence of youth in Mikey's fumbling for words and the joy in Sally's receiving of the ring, even with the little interruptions..
.:)..
posted by
Rumor
on January 5, 2011 at 4:28 PM
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