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Came back for a 2nd read Sinome..just lovely.
posted by
shobana
on January 11, 2011 at 10:02 PM
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SUCH A SWEET LOVE STORY, MAY YOUR HEART KNOW NOTHING BUT PEACE
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 6, 2011 at 7:59 AM
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WOW!
I have not read or wrote in some time until today. Look what I find when I return. Beautiful!!!
posted by
Justi
on January 5, 2011 at 10:54 PM
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Sinome
What an expression of love...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 5, 2011 at 9:10 PM
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This love is just amazing Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on January 5, 2011 at 7:52 PM
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What a powerful feeling love is as this poem shows.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 5, 2011 at 7:29 PM
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Sinome
You really made holding hands a terrific expression of love and togetherness
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 5, 2011 at 2:30 PM
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Very nice Simone you tell it beautifully. A really nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on January 5, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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There is something really special about holding hands.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 5, 2011 at 10:50 AM
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I would do more than hold your hand...I would hug you
for the delight of the intimacy and Romance revealed in this poem. A wonderful read Thank you dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2011 at 10:32 AM
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I really like the way that you come back to holding hands in each stanza, remids me of the first time I held my wife's hand 27 years ago. Great poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 5, 2011 at 10:13 AM
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Bravo ~ my goodness Sinome, you shine in this write --- your heart bares it all...beautiful, take a bow ~ xooxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 5, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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This may be one of your best, it's magnificent xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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