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Thanks everyone! Lol, John, it was good enough to say it twice! :)
posted by
calia14
on January 5, 2011 at 9:49 AM
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So very true on working on solutions; makes much more sense to me! And, as this happens a little bit of heaven on earth can be achieved! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 5, 2011 at 7:03 AM
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The future looks very bright.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 2, 2011 at 4:19 PM
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Well, I didn't know it was that good that I had to say it twice, but evidently my keyboard thought so....
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2011 at 2:32 PM
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Rhyme: where some thoughts and feelings come together to make sense out of themselves, perhaps mirroring in miniature the larger couplet. Seems you have a gift here.
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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Rhyme: where some thoughts and feelings come together to make sense out of themselves, perhaps mirroring in miniature the larger couplet. Seems you have a gift here.
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2011 at 2:29 PM
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Heaven
Nice poem...I hope all your dreams come true..happy new year.
posted by
MsJudy
on January 2, 2011 at 12:56 PM
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May all your resolves and desires and anything you want come to full fruition --- Happy New Year Calia ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 2, 2011 at 9:11 AM
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I like the agency in this poem, calia. it's about doing, not about just
hoping.
posted by
Straightforward
on January 2, 2011 at 5:20 AM
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