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Come on Mystereo, we need another one of your lovely poems :)
  Do you still have your cat?

posted by Cheerygirl on January 6, 2011 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for stopping by Mystereo. I was glad to know you were ok. :)

posted by Cheerygirl on January 5, 2011 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

Mystereo we need more of your poetry... HAPPY 2011!
Even after several reads this is still a great poem.

posted by Cheerygirl on January 4, 2011 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely imagery....I'll try to be more frequent in my visits to Blogit again...I've missed reading friends like yourself.  Happy New Year!

posted by Krisles on January 3, 2011 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

You know I have to keep reading what is here until you put up your next one.  Happy New Year.

posted by TAPS. on January 2, 2011 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

ENDLESS DREAM'
Beautiful poem...I so enjoyed reading it.

posted by MsJudy on January 2, 2011 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

Wasn't sure where this was going at first, and I got confused with a period after each line, which to me means "stop" and look both ways. But if a train ever did this, it would never reach its station. It also gave me the impression of a list of enumeration--something from the outside in ("oh, can I count the ways")--which I had forgoten about because it's been a few decades. But just as I was about to give up, I reached the last lines, I could feel both of us exhaling, and I didnt even know I was holding my breath. Maybe I don't know how to relate to this kind of poem, but I do know something about breathing.

posted by jfm32 on January 2, 2011 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

I have enjoyed your poems this year Mystereo and look forward
to each new one that comes along, whether there are more to come this year I don't know but I hope 2011 will see many, many more.

posted by Cheerygirl on December 29, 2010 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

ENDLESS DREAM
Powerful stuff. Very enjoyable. Good. Hope you and your family had  a great Christmas and I hope you all have a very happy New Year.

posted by Cheerygirl on December 27, 2010 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

 Dreams are what our soul lives for.  I really enjoyed your imagery here.  Beautiful and sensuously rich.  Have a great week as well as a Happy New Year, Mystereo.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on December 26, 2010 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Like the last line as turn-around into the arrow of becheaching becommingness--as if a thought could contain the secret of its possibilities, and alas, to reach this bittersweet truth of why poetry?

posted by jfm32 on December 26, 2010 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

There's some level of reality in feeling that way.  Another fine romantic poem with original, exciting images!! Kudo's to you. 

posted by mariss9 on December 25, 2010 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Mysterio

TY I’d like to reconcile dreams and reality myself love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on December 25, 2010 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Endless dreams indeed! You paint such a lovely picture and end it with a an amazing turn of events and yet it remains hopeful for dreams do come true! Merry Christmas!!!!!  sam 

posted by sam444 on December 25, 2010 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

I hope and believe that your dreams will come true. Beautiful poem

posted by longsam on December 24, 2010 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

Quite Romantic!

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on December 23, 2010 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

AS long as you can dream Sir. Reality doesn't last long sometimes.Nice poem 

posted by C_C_T on December 23, 2010 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

An exquisite declaration of love..loved the poem very much.

posted by shobana on December 23, 2010 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

Dream your dreams and then work to make them come true.  Lovely.

posted by TAPS. on December 23, 2010 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply