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Beautiful in it's own way when the ice glistens on the trees, but maybe rough on the trees if it stays any length of time. The snow is beautiful in it's own way. I still have frostbitten type hands from my earlier love of playing in it for hours as a kid when there was a big snow.
posted by
mariss9
on December 23, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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TY A lot of reminders of renewal. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 21, 2010 at 10:16 PM
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each season has its own unique beauty...
and the trees bend and blend to fit themselves into each one....they do look bare and barren in winter, but its only temporary, as you say so well..
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posted by
Rumor
on December 20, 2010 at 2:36 PM
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eburns111
I am surrounded by the beauty of winter and the beauty of your poetry.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 20, 2010 at 11:41 AM
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I like this poem, it does give it up to nature! Kudos, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 20, 2010 at 4:04 AM
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Re: thanks dsm, welcome to blogit
posted by
eburns111
on December 19, 2010 at 8:42 PM
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Lo Eburns I think any take on Nature is quite worthy. it is hard to think passionately about frozen trees etc, but you seem to have the knack. Wrap up warmly.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 19, 2010 at 11:11 AM
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Re:
to clarify the last line, the fields become tracked by the digging and rutting of tractors, farming machines,
posted by
eburns111
on December 19, 2010 at 9:07 AM
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Great stuff here, IMHO.
I love nature and seasons and trees above all. Observing trees captivates me.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 19, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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eburns, Nice to meet you. I loved your opening stanzas, and feel very embraced by them. It's the way winter is here in the Midwest. I didn't understand the last line, or it went over my head. But the poem made me think of not just the weather cycles and season changes, but the spiritual renewal possible at any age. TY!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on December 19, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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