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Re: Nileangel
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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Re: Nita09
thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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Re: sam444
thanks Sam, I should have known you'd pick that one up - there is some ambiguity there on purpose because it's not entirely a bad thing to wander in one's own mind sometimes (I think)
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you
I think it's very easy these days - we have so many things trying to convince us that they know what we need or should think that it becomes ever more simple to lose sight of ourselves
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:45 AM
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Re: A Stranger
Thanks Cheerygirl, with the dark season I always have more of a search for inspiration (if only because I go out and do less) and so my poetry often becomes more introspective... most of them are more cheerful than this though
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you sweetie, I'm glad you liked it xoxox
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:41 AM
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Re: hellooooooooooooo connecting here with a comment
haha thanks Kabu, it rarely lasts more than a few minutes for me - just long enough to capture in ink
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Re: lionreign, that can indeed be a horrible feeling...
Thanks Rumor! I'm glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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Re: I have felt like this sometimes
I think it gets us all sometimes... luckily it passes. The snow only reached us today, but I understand we have got off lightly compared to most
posted by
lionreign
on December 20, 2010 at 7:34 AM
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Excellent write, very deep. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on December 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Vividly expressed, as always! Thanks for the visit!
posted by
Nita09
on December 19, 2010 at 3:35 AM
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lionreign
TR However we know you. BC=A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 18, 2010 at 9:44 PM
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So well written, as always. Plumbing the depths of the human mind and stumbling around - I guess we've all been there.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on December 18, 2010 at 9:09 AM
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I really liked "I see everything I was taught"! Somehow this could go more than one way depending how the interpretation the state of mind as it were! I love poems that can offer up this way!
posted by
sam444
on December 18, 2010 at 6:10 AM
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I do believe that we can be strangers even in our own mind lionreign..excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on December 18, 2010 at 3:19 AM
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A Stranger
You're not switching to writing poetry for horror magazines are you Lionreign? Are you getting enough sleep? Interesting poem. Always an interesting read.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 17, 2010 at 7:55 PM
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As only you can capture it, that awful feeling that so many of us know so well. Brilliant writing sweetie :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 17, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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hellooooooooooooo connecting here with a comment
I have been like this though and it is terrible.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2010 at 3:33 PM
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lionreign, that can indeed be a horrible feeling...
a day can be going along and its as if your mind is not your own, you're a prisoner in someone else's mind (or imaybe lost in your own?)....mind and body seem somehow detached...you've captured that hopeless feeling very well.
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posted by
Rumor
on December 17, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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I have felt like this sometimes
and it really made a connection with me. Have a good weekend and hope there's not too much snow where you are?
posted by
malcolm
on December 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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