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Thank you Lion I hope i can live up to them.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 8:15 AM
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Thank you Sam for thinking of it this way
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 8:10 AM
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C.C.....I, too say, well done...
this speaks to one's heart and we can't help "just wondering", along with you...
Your last stanza sums all the wondering up beautifully and candidly and gives us a great look at love:
"Love that is not physical is probably the golden blend
To feel this must be the pinnacle of life, not just at the end
when loss makes this worthy thought possible. The giving
of this to someone or many must be the true feeling."
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posted by
Rumor
on December 9, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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Very nicely done, I like the train of your thoughts
posted by
lionreign
on December 9, 2010 at 7:32 AM
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I love this poem! I love the candor and the innocence! One can reach out to God in any way, it's the reaching out that pleases Him most! The voice in the poem is superb because it touches the reader and I think that is always marvelous when it occurs! Well done, C.C.! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 9, 2010 at 4:05 AM
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Re: CORNCROAK Wiley
Yes it is doing it that counts Wiley as you suggest.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:37 AM
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Re: I believe that the innocence of a child is the pathway to all Faith.
You are probably right Kabu, we all search for something when we are small
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:35 AM
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Glad you are back Simone, not my usual thing though is it.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:33 AM
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Re: CC
WEll I was tiny Justi, but I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:32 AM
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Re: FS
Well of course you have FS. It is one of life's mysteries
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:29 AM
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Bill
Join the queue Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2010 at 3:27 AM
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Corncroak
Y I want to know the true feeling better sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 8, 2010 at 10:11 PM
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Love can do so much for us. Like the speaker, I've had doubts about my praying abilities over the years...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 8, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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CC
Oh how beautiful. God speaks sometimes in voice, I have not had that experience but it does happen. He does speak to us through his Holy Spirit. You don't have to be good at praying only to talk with God. He wants a relationship with us. This is your best work it is so pure. xoxoxo
posted by
Justi
on December 8, 2010 at 7:30 PM
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Such a wonderful poem!. I missed your writing :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 8, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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I believe that the innocence of a child is the pathway to all Faith.
posted by
Kabu
on December 8, 2010 at 11:36 AM
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CORNCROAK
I think you hit on the answer of love simply the 'giving' of love to someone or many. Beautifully written my friend,
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 8, 2010 at 11:31 AM
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