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Powerful very powerful this is rising the bar!!!

posted by Mystereo on December 9, 2010 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

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Maybe we do it because we are optimists and we are only really alive when we love someone and with any luck they love us in return.. My next poem may anewer this better.

posted by longsam on December 8, 2010 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

posted by Raye09 on December 8, 2010 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Very cleverly put!  I love the imagery of this one

posted by lionreign on December 8, 2010 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

as we all do,  why do we do that!!!!

posted by spiderfly on December 8, 2010 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

longsam

Ý The feeling of hurt does not favor the indoors or outdoors. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on December 8, 2010 at 4:06 AM | link to this | reply