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Merry Christmas Mystereo.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 21, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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great poem i really enjoyed it. It actually served as a bedtime story
cause I am going to sleep :)
posted by
Tzippy
on December 16, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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Excellent! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 16, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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Brilliantly put! I love the way you present this and the last two lines are just absolute brilliance
posted by
lionreign
on December 16, 2010 at 7:35 AM
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I've seen a lot of that in my lifetime--those who've fallen, some who were able to get back up, and many who couldn't. Well written.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 13, 2010 at 10:55 AM
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Thanks for all your great comments, stories and jokes Mystereo to my blog
and of course thank you for all your lovely poems which we all enjoy so much!
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 12, 2010 at 4:59 PM
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How so true, Jesus is there for us all the time.
posted by
shobana
on December 12, 2010 at 2:49 AM
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WATCH WHAT YOU GRAB WHEN YOU FALL
There is some good advice here Mystereo. Good.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 8, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Excellent instruction in all ways. Where he might have been if he had turned to Jesus rather than his choice. Amen.
posted by
mariss9
on December 8, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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Amen! He is ever present in times of trouble! And the poem is so correct when it states that putting faith in fellow man is sure to leave one dismayed! Lots of words of wisdom throughout this engaging poem! I read it aloud and it makes a lot of difference in the emphasis, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 8, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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so what happens if you do not believe in Jesus. I have to believe there are people out there to trust. To trust in humanity and learn that it is not all bad and thet some of it just does not need saving. I believe that
posted by
spiderfly
on December 8, 2010 at 5:11 AM
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Mysterio
Ý That other rose’s a good choice love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on December 8, 2010 at 3:01 AM
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absolutely 100% AWESOME MAN! WOW....You and I both have known the streets it seem like. Great poem....now I'm going to bed on that one! You got the award (Ace) tonight! LOL! Aceblade
posted by
aceblade
on December 7, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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Amen! Jesus is the answer!
God Bless! 
posted by
dougspoetry
on December 7, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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