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Re: Sam444
thank you so much! No worries about getting behind sweetie, I check on you anyway, even if I don't post
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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Re: lionreign
Some words do - they may not be the ones i was looking for, but they work
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Re: Block
Wow, thanks Cheerygirl, I don't know what to say...
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Re: Not bad for someone who wrote nothing!
Thanks Kabu!
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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Re: longsam
but if I wasn't clocked what was I writing about?
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 7:42 AM
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I like how addressing what is happening and making it into a fine poem that so many can relate to! This is a qualifier! So sorry I got behind on reading you...dreaded migraines again! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 7, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Re: Corncroak
Thanks - the only way i can write is to write what is going on in my head right now....
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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Re: elysianfields
Thanks Elyse! you could call it "Frustration"
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 6:53 AM
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Re: lionreign...and I know this feeling very well, too, my friend....
Thanks Rumor, sometimes I get so hung up on being blocked that it's all i can think about... then I write about it
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 6:41 AM
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Re: only you can write a poem about not writing a poem
Thank you Tzippy, I'm delighted you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 6:26 AM
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Re: I have many days like this
Sadly my poems are small chunks... I tend to have most trouble with beginnings, once I have started I can get going, but it's finding that thought, that feeling to hang it all on that is hardest
posted by
lionreign
on December 7, 2010 at 6:22 AM
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lionreign
I see that the right words get through. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 7, 2010 at 3:09 AM
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Block
Good poem. You are good at painting pictures in our minds with your words, capturing your subject in such a way that the reader is caught up with you, and wants to hold on with you; through the adventure or problem to the other side and to the very end. Well done Lionreign you are very gifted.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 6, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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Not bad for someone who wrote nothing!
posted by
Kabu
on December 6, 2010 at 5:55 PM
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If you can write a poem about being 'blocked then I don't think you are 'blocked'! Anyway I loved it
posted by
longsam
on December 6, 2010 at 2:40 PM
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Well you are lucky Lion I usually fall alseep and think what's this rubbish I've been writing. At least you carved a poem from it.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 6, 2010 at 11:34 AM
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and I could sketch or paint a watercolor from these words ~~~ Have a lovely week, LionR -
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 6, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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lionreign...and I know this feeling very well, too, my friend....
some days its quite immoveable, but at a moment's notice that block can tumble...(the tiniest impression or thought can dynamite it into oblivion)..
..you've captured the helplessness of that "block" so well.
....
posted by
Rumor
on December 6, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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only you can write a poem about not writing a poem
and come up with something that is fun to read
posted by
Tzippy
on December 6, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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I have many days like this
and yesterday was certainly one of them. Sometimes the enormity of all the things I want to do prevents me from even trying to make a start. I tell myself to break things down into small, manageable chunks - which usually works.
posted by
malcolm
on December 6, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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