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Tzippy
She's like someone searching for a way to destroy herself...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 6, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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I like it! You take us right in there with her; we feel the love, the despair, the longing, the rejection of that longing. Good writing!
posted by
adnohr
on December 5, 2010 at 4:38 AM
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What a powerful relationship the two of them share...I cannot imagine what it would be like to have that sort of guilt hanging over my head...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 4, 2010 at 4:00 PM
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Forbidden...
Well... What will happen next? Interesting stuff.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 4, 2010 at 3:09 PM
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sometimes a person just can't seem to avoid their fate...I long for more.
posted by
Kabu
on December 4, 2010 at 12:38 PM
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This gal is so slow to catch on! I believe that is what keeps the reader engrossed! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 4, 2010 at 11:17 AM
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