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Winners they pull you along. You are a writer. It is good.
posted by
Justi
on December 2, 2010 at 7:36 PM
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Passionate indeed
and definitely makes me want to read more
posted by
malcolm
on December 2, 2010 at 12:29 PM
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I think either one of these versions has a great potential for success! Right on and write on! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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You captured my attention straight away - this is very very intense, all the more so for being so real
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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It's very real. It happens to so many. One of my many great-nieces, only 17 is expecting to give birth to a little girl this month. The birth father is long gone and she says, "I don't know how it happened, I don't even like him."
posted by
TAPS.
on December 1, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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THIS IS THE BACK BONE FOR A GREAT STORY....
Probably it is better to write one version and then another, people can't always read as often as retired lil old me for example so they get confused. yes, never confuse your readers too much...or expect too much from them...those are lessons I have had to learn the tough way...tried and flopped!
posted by
Kabu
on December 1, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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This is a gripping tale. You have me wanting more!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 1, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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Forbidden Love
Interesting stuff.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 1, 2010 at 6:25 PM
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Tzippy
This could be the framework for a very interesting story...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 1, 2010 at 5:27 PM
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Forbidden Love
Tippy this is going to be a great story..I look forward to the next post.
posted by
MsJudy
on December 1, 2010 at 2:08 PM
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