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Winners they pull you along. You are a writer. It is good.

posted by Justi on December 2, 2010 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Passionate indeed
and definitely makes me want to read more

posted by malcolm on December 2, 2010 at 12:29 PM | link to this | reply

I think either one of these versions has a great potential for success! Right on and write on! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 2, 2010 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

You captured my attention straight away - this is very very intense, all the more so for being so real

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2010 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

It's very real.  It happens to so many.  One of my many great-nieces, only 17 is expecting to give birth to a little girl this month.  The birth father is long gone and she says, "I don't know how it happened, I don't even like him."

posted by TAPS. on December 1, 2010 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

THIS IS THE BACK BONE FOR A GREAT STORY....
Probably it is better to write one version and then another, people can't always read as often as retired lil old me for example so they get confused. yes, never confuse your readers too much...or expect too much from them...those are lessons I have had to learn the tough way...tried and flopped!

posted by Kabu on December 1, 2010 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

This is a gripping tale. You have me wanting more!

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 1, 2010 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Forbidden Love
Interesting stuff.

posted by Cheerygirl on December 1, 2010 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

Tzippy
This could be the framework for a very interesting story...

posted by Nautikos on December 1, 2010 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply

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Tippy this is going to be a great story..I look forward to the next post.

posted by MsJudy on December 1, 2010 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply